Thought…

This song had been on the cards for quite some time !! Just thought I'd put the first draft in…

[Only Riffy rhythm highly muted and flangy...]
[Drums 1 roll]
[Both the guitars and the base come in with a sweep and the drums go wild]
[Just the drums and base]

All the guys in the alley checking out what you got
Making heads turn, reaching out what you sought

[riff comes back again]

Straight hair, maybe a wave put right here and there
Torn jeans, crumpled shirt, tight as much as y'can dare…

[a pause...]
[Full blast ... All the instruments come again...]
[Main chorus]

She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, can I where…
If I do get, can I bear…

[Slow down... Drums and base...]

Got a chance to see her as I shook my head
Crazy style she's got, dropping me dead.

[riff comes in...]

Little time thinking thoughts fluttering over the bar

[pause]

She was moving fast, all i got to see o her was her car….

[Cymbals crash... after the pause]
[Then full blast instruments come in]
[vocals scream]

She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…

She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…

[Lead kinda riffy with a lotta holds...
The rhythm is playing the base riff]

[guitar strong riff but muted + drums + base]
[Vocals mellow]

Tying knots, cringing heads, she's a spectacle dot
Sporty heels, suffocating with what she's got…

[Full blast after a short pause]

Straight hair, maybe a wave put right here and there
Torn jeans, crumpled shirt, tight as much as y'can dare…

[Repeat before the lead]

She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…

[Hold the riff for a short period]

Just the lyrics.

All the guys in the alley checking out what you got
Making heads turn, reaching out what you sought
Straight hair, maybe a wave put right here and there
Torn jeans, crumpled shirt, tight as much as y'can dare…

[Main chorus]
She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, can I where…
If I do get, can I bear…

Got a chance to see her as I shook my head
Crazy style she's got, dropping me dead.
Little time thinking thoughts fluttering over the bar
She was moving fast, all i got to see o her was her car….

She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…

She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…

Tying knots, cringing heads, she's a spectacle dot
Sporty heels, suffocating with what she's got…

Straight hair, maybe a wave put right here and there
Torn jeans, crumpled shirt, tight as much as y'can dare…

She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…

Have to make this into a song … Damn it's running well in my head now !!