This song had been on the cards for quite some time :-D!! Just thought I'd put the first draft in…
[Only Riffy rhythm highly muted and flangy…]
[Drums 1 roll]
[Both the guitars and the base come in with a sweep and the drums go wild]
[Just the drums and base]All the guys in the alley checking out what you got
Making heads turn, reaching out what you sought[riff comes back again]
Straight hair, maybe a wave put right here and there
Torn jeans, crumpled shirt, tight as much as y'can dare…[a pause…]
[Full blast … All the instruments come again…]
[Main chorus]She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, can I where…
If I do get, can I bear…[Slow down… Drums and base…]
Got a chance to see her as I shook my head
Crazy style she's got, dropping me dead.[riff comes in…]
Little time thinking thoughts fluttering over the bar
[pause]
She was moving fast, all i got to see o her was her car….
[Cymbals crash… after the pause]
[Then full blast instruments come in]
[vocals scream]She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…[Lead kinda riffy with a lotta holds…
The rhythm is playing the base riff][guitar strong riff but muted + drums + base]
[Vocals mellow]Tying knots, cringing heads, she's a spectacle dot
Sporty heels, suffocating with what she's got…[Full blast after a short pause]
Straight hair, maybe a wave put right here and there
Torn jeans, crumpled shirt, tight as much as y'can dare…[Repeat before the lead]
She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…[Hold the riff for a short period]
Just the lyrics.
All the guys in the alley checking out what you got
Making heads turn, reaching out what you sought
Straight hair, maybe a wave put right here and there
Torn jeans, crumpled shirt, tight as much as y'can dare…[Main chorus]
She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, can I where…
If I do get, can I bear…Got a chance to see her as I shook my head
Crazy style she's got, dropping me dead.
Little time thinking thoughts fluttering over the bar
She was moving fast, all i got to see o her was her car….She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…Tying knots, cringing heads, she's a spectacle dot
Sporty heels, suffocating with what she's got…Straight hair, maybe a wave put right here and there
Torn jeans, crumpled shirt, tight as much as y'can dare…She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…
Have to make this into a song … Damn it's running well in my head now :-D!!

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